My favourite piece of writing

The nerves and frustrations were melting in my head, was I going to win or not that was the two words that were repeating in my my head., We were on course number 16 in Taupo mini golf it looked like it was going to a thriller of a finish the scores felt like they were pretty close so I had to play smart and safe 1 2 3 I couldn't believe it Cayleb Rauto had got a hole in one and on the other hand I had got a hole in 2 and my mum had got a hole in 3. I took to my normal positions at the start of the course boom boom I could feel my heart thumping Cayleb swung , 2 Cayleb said in a excited voice it was a close score again. Hole 18 the last hole,for the last time I took my position I felt so professional like I was tiger woods but of course not I wasn't him no where as good as him or as rich as him and we were just at a mini golf course not a pounce golf course like pros use. Whoosh as the breeze brushed passed me as I swung, dammit it wasn't the dream hit I imagined to be like, I finished the hole with a score of 3 after we had all a turn we head did to the office to hand in our golf clubs then the time came the grand finally was upon us how had won, Its a tie Cayleb expressed in a disappointed voice. well as the day came to a close we decided to head to MacDonald to feed our disappointed and our hunger then we headed back to my aunt's new house and relaxed for the night.

I liked this piece of writing because it sums up my holiday which was fun.
I need to improve on my variety of sentences starters.

Navy band.

Monday, 10 March 2014

Navy band.

We had a blast signing and dancing to the tunes of the band.

We all enjoyed the fun exciting event they were amazing playing there instruments.

I went up twice on stage the musical centre was pretty packed so it was quite nerve racking.

The things I went up there for was to conduct the orchestra and dance to the can can.

All about me

 My name is Caden I was born on the 19 of April 2002 in Hastings hospital. I live with my mum in 31 Ellen's Lane in Clive is have a fun weird family we call ourself's the Harvey's

and on my dad's side there called the Mouat's. My mums name is Kelly Anne Harvey and my dads name is Darren Peter Mouat they both are unique and lovable in their own ways. Things I love to do are well I have a passion for sports but raising high above any sport is rugby I have grow a love and a passion with the sport whether I'm out on the field or watching. Every rugby match that is on sky sport I'm watching it in lease I'm busy,I also like a huge range of sports like cricket, netball, basketball, soccer, and much more. Well that's just a little bit about me hope you liked it.

The Goose that laid golden eggs.

There once lived poor couple that lived on a farm. The couple owned some goose, one day they discovered that one of their goose laid golden eggs the old  couple were astonished. The golden eggs made them very rich. One day the old man suggested that they would be richer faster if we get all of the eggs out of the goose the wife agreed. So they killed the goose but there were no eggs inside the goose at all.

moral

Too much greed results in nothing

biography www.storyit.com/stories/goldengooseegg.htm.

Tacs triathlon

Tac's was a blast I really I joyed the experience. 

Myself and my team of Taine , Te Mana Potiki and me came 3rd.